Wikipedia:Peer review/Twenty-five Year Award/archive1

Twenty-five Year Award
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I feel it is close to being a featured list. Any input with an eye toward featured list status would be helpful.

Thanks, Found5dollar (talk) 19:46, 21 June 2011 (UTC)

Solid read, did some copyediting along the way. Res Mar 22:26, 26 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Lead
 * Out of the 41 projects that have received this award, only two, Eames House and the Vietnam Veterans Memorial, had women as a named contributing architect. This is a little awkward in my opinion, I would use "were partially designed by women" instead, but I'm hesitant on this one.
 * One-sentence paragraphs are generally a no-no. I've moved it up to the first paragraph, and bit off the part about it standing 25 years&mdash;this is not very important overall, and is information better placed in the list itself.
 * References
 * I've shifted the lone reference you tacked on on the end there into its own section as a "General" reference; see e.g. Rumford Prize how this is handled.


 * Thank you fro your Review and edits!--Found5dollar (talk) 23:43, 27 June 2011 (UTC)
 * You're welcome =) Res Mar 22:53, 28 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Just a heads up: I'm away for 2 weeks starting tomorrow. Res Mar 02:34, 2 July 2011 (UTC)