Wikipedia:Peer review/U.B. Funkeys/archive1

U.B._Funkeys
I've listed this article for peer review because it is a new style of game where you have little hardware pieces that affect how you look in the game. I am looking for a broader group of editors that are more experienced than my myself to help me refine the article. Especially since the article has already undergone extensive work.

Thanks,

MahaPanta 23:04, 5 November 2007 (UTC)


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 * Thank you. That is very helpful. This is the first article I've tried to improve, so I am learning how Wikipedia works as I go along. I've basically adopted this article and I am becoming a better wikipedia user and learn how to make good articles as I improve this one. Now that I think about it, this would be a good exercise for all new wikipedians, and imagine how much better articles we would have, because I knew nothing about editing wikipedia articles before I made my first contribute to this one. --MahaPanta 15:54, 9 November 2007 (UTC)