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UEFA Celebration Match
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it is not far away from FA status, or at least GA status. I'm mainly looking for comments about the content and if I've missed anything, but any comments that would help the article meet the FA/GA criteria would be appreciated.

Thanks, – PeeJay 16:41, 10 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Just a couple of notes: the summary is unreferenced and seems to contain quite a bit of POV, e.g. "perfectly timed" and metaphor, e.g. "Wes Brown was on hand". In the officials section, there is discussion that the referee was the "German representative" at the 2002 and 2006 WCs but iirc the officials don't represent their country, but FIFA during these tournaments. Perhaps the wording there could be tweaked. C679 15:21, 11 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Yeah, the summary section could do with a bit of a tighten. I'll blitz it when I have some time tomorrow. And the officials at the World Cup may officially be FIFA referees, but Merk was still there as a representative of the German Football Association, if only idiomatically. – PeeJay 22:21, 11 June 2014 (UTC)