Wikipedia:Peer review/Ultimate Fighting Championship/archive1

Ultimate Fighting Championship
I think this article is getting close to good article or feature article status. Within the WP:MMA project, it seems to be the best article out of the entire project, and I think getting some feedback can help us in the project concentrate on finding out what exactly it takes to elevate articles to a GA or FA status. hateless 01:17, 7 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Nice article, still room for improvement though:
 * "human cockfighting" in the lead does not reappear in the main body. EVERYTHING you say in the lead needs to be repeated below, or cut it out entirely.


 * Could use some more pics, e.g. of historical matches (1992?) or of the video games
 * Too many redlinks, please de-wikilink them or create new articles
 * "86,592 television subscribers" in 1992 needs sourcing
 * "Many martial artists believed that technique could overcome these size disadvantages..." (1992 section) => source plz
 * "Controversy and reform" is undersourced
 * "Evolution of the UFC rules" is unsourced


 * That were my 2 cents. If you could give Peer_review/Wilt_Chamberlain a look, I would be happy. —Onomatopoeia 08:43, 7 March 2007 (UTC)