Wikipedia:Peer review/Uncyclopedia/archive3

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This article has changed a lot since the last time it was reviewed. I'm aiming to get this to be a good article by the end of the year. --Jedravent (talk) 00:56, 27 November 2007 (UTC)


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AnonEMouse (squeak)
Amazing, I wouldn't have thought this subject could be written about so well.
 * also known as Chronarion[3], -> Chronarion,[3] move the reference tag after punctuation, not before
 * Add more "retrieved on" dates to the references. Some have them, some don't. "Uncyclopedia joins Wikia." for example. For a wiki, the date it said something is very important! Same for author, write that Angela Beesley wrote that one.
 * Were Chronarion and Stillwaters originally Wikipedia editors?
 * leading to the deletion of many new articles.[24][6] move the earlier ref before the later one -> [6][24]
 * There seems to be some overlap about the Chinese/Taiwanese encyclopedias and their blocks between Criticism and In other languages sections. Are there two different blocks, the Golden Shield and Great Firewall, or are these the same thing?

All in all, surprisingly good, I can't think of much that needs to be added. --AnonEMouse (squeak) 15:51, 11 December 2007 (UTC)
 * Done all except the Wikipedia editors part. They do have accounts (User:Chronarion and Jedravent (talk) 21:53, 13 December 2007 (UTC)