Wikipedia:Peer review/Underwater diving/archive1

Underwater diving
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to take it to FA, and would like comments particularly on completeness of scope, clarity of writing and comprehensibility of explanation. I have already done the automatic checks from the toolbox. I would be happy with a review from an expert in the field, or someone who has no previous knowledge of the subject at all, or anything in between, all could be helpful.

Thanks, &bull; &bull; &bull; Peter (Southwood) (talk): 14:13, 7 February 2017 (UTC)


 * I include my comment here only to point out a possible inclusion of material related to aquatic ape hypothesis, a WP:FRINGE theory which includes somewhat dubious claims about the antiquity of diving as a bread-and-butter point. However, the work of Erika Schagatay and her colleagues in documenting the anthropology of the (somewhat offensively named) Sea Gypsies -- Sama-Bajau peoples may be worth of inclusion in your article. Not to mention that there are some images that this group took which are found on WikiCommons which may be of interest to you. jps (talk) 18:15, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
 * , could you disambiguate your link to Sea Gypsies and link to the Commons category which contains the images you mention? &bull; &bull; &bull; Peter (Southwood) (talk): 12:29, 13 April 2017 (UTC)
 * I thought there was a Commons category, but actually there isn't. In any case uploaded all the images of interest: . jps (talk) 15:06, 13 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I will look into this. &bull; &bull; &bull; Peter (Southwood) (talk): 11:10, 14 April 2017 (UTC)