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Unfinished work
I don't think this can be expanded much further, but other people might have some ideas that I've not thought about yet. There are some references still needed, but I think the examples illustrate the article well. Any comments or ideas before I take it forward to FA? violet/riga (t) 15:14, 7 August 2006 (UTC)
 * It looks good and is well referenced, but reads a bit like a list. Also, Film should be moved to the end. Such short article generally don't make FA, Have you tried WP:GA?Self-Described Seabhcán 16:27, 8 August 2006 (UTC)
 * If it's complete then size doesn't matter for FA. I'll see if I can flesh things out to move it away from reading like a list.  And the film section is first because it's alphabetical, though I could understand the chronological order idea.  Thanks for the comments.  violet/riga (t) 19:08, 8 August 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 01:24, 9 August 2006 (UTC)

Undergone several expansions, 22:56, 10 August 2006 (UTC) violet/riga (t)