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Union Square (Hong Kong)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I feel that, for the amount of information on this article and the amount of detail it goes into, it can no longer be considered stub class. The article contains several subsections with descriptions of most individual projects - it's come on a long way since it was last reviewed - this is why I think it should be re-evaluated.

Thanks, Peter (talk) 20:37, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Brief comments from Goodvac
I have completed a copyedit of the article. Here are some points of confusion:
 * Lead
 * "The built area includes 5,866 residential units, totalling..." What does "The built area" mean?


 * Sorrento
 * "All five towers follow the same design however reduced in height consecutively with the tallest being Sorrento 1 and the shortest being Sorrento 6." Not sure what this means.


 * The Harbourside
 * "Construction of the 74-storey building began in 2001 and was completed in 2004 under the design by P & T Architects & Engineers." Was P & T Architects & Engineers the architect, the constructor, or both? Or something else?


 * The Cullinan
 * "The North Tower and South Tower ... were completed in 2008 and 2009" Was the North Tower completed in 2008 and the South Tower completed in 2009?

Goodvac (talk) 23:03, 25 October 2011 (UTC)