Wikipedia:Peer review/United Buddy Bears/archive1

United Buddy Bears
This is the first article that I've made, and I'd really appreciate any pointers on how I could improve this, and future articles, aswell as what I should avoid. Thanks in advance! --ChinaNailStorm 17:25, 4 June 2006 (UTC)

I think it needs a few more references and perhaps a few more links to other articles. 0L1 13:57, 1 July 2006 (UTC)