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University of California, San Diego

 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for February 2009. Done. --Cybercobra (talk) 04:21, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for February 2009. Done. --Cybercobra (talk) 04:21, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because sibling article UC Riverside is already a Featured Article (in fact, it's today's featured article as of this writing) whereas UCSD isn't even a Good Article. Therefore I wish to solicit suggestions to improve it.

Thanks, Cybercobra (talk) 12:11, 21 February 2009 (UTC)

Comments from Dtbohrer


 * "research university" redirects to "univeristy" Done.--Tech30 (talk) 18:07, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
 * "San Diego, California" redirects to "San Diego" Done.--Tech30 (talk) 18:09, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
 * "MacArthur Fellowship" redirects to "MacArthur Fellows Program"
 * "UC San Diego Medical Center" redirects to "University of California, San Diego Medical Center"
 * "Pell grants" redirects to "Pell Grant"
 * "UC Berkeley" redirects to "University of California, Berkeley"
 * "UCLA" redirects to "University of California, Los Angeles"
 * "Stanford" redirects "Stanford University"
 * "UC San Diego Tritons" redirects to "University of California, San Diego Tritons"


 * The list of UC San Diego's 6 colleges should be made into a paragraph.
 * The "Recognition" section has an "outdated" tag.
 * The "Admissions" section has external links in the paragraph. Inline citations needed instead Done. --Cybercobra (talk) 03:30, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "Citation needed" tag in "Student life" section Cited. --Cybercobra (talk) 04:24, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
 * The "Notable people" section could be incorporated into a "See also" section. Done. --Cybercobra (talk) 03:30, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
 * The University of California, San Diego is refered to as both UCSD and UC San Diego in the article. I think one or other should be used consistently.
 * In the "Academics" section 4 images are stacked up on each other. I think a 1 or 2 could be removed and the rest should alternate between being right-aligned and left-aligned. Done. --Cybercobra (talk) 04:02, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
 * The gallery in the "public art" section should be removed. (see WP:MOSIMAGE and WP:Image use policy) One image should remain in the section, while the rest could be put in the "Stuart Collection" article or on Commons. Done. --Cybercobra (talk) 03:47, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

Shouldn't be too difficult to UC San Diego to GA. As you mentioned UC Riverside is an FA, making it a good model for improving UC San Diego. --​​ ​​D.B. talk • contribs 16:23, 25 February 2009 (UTC)