Wikipedia:Peer review/University of Manchester Library/archive1

University of Manchester Library
I've listed this article for peer review because…: the stable version of the article in existence for a long time was changed to a version which I believe is less historically accurate so it would be useful to hear what other editors think about those changes.

Thanks, Johnsoniensis (talk) 08:16, 27 July 2016 (UTC)

Sorry for the late review User:Johnsoniensis. Some issues I found are: Anyway, good luck with the article. I'm also doing a peer review here so I would appreciate some feedback. Good luck with the article.Tintor2 (talk) 14:36, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Clean up the lead to at maximum four paragraphs with each one having two or three sentences focused on the same subjects.
 * The last sentences from Contents are unsourced.
 * Same with Library buildings.
 * You could also merge Partial refurbishment with Libary buildings unless you are going to expand the former.
 * 1851–1936 is too long for a single paragraph. Try splitting them to at least two with each keeping references.
 * Moses Tyson is unsourced
 * "Frederick Ratcliffe to Jan Wilkinson" is unsourced.
 * Same with "Former librarians"