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Uttarakhand
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I want a wholesome review as to how to improve this page so as to make it one of the best articles on this site.

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Redtigerxyz Talk 18:11, 10 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Redtigerxyz's comments
 * FA Karnataka model can be followed in structure and as a reference
 * The article suffers too much from WP:RECENTISM. "Chief ministers of Uttarakhand" list and dates of elections is not needed.
 * There are many lists in the articles which need to be incorporated in the text format. List of Universities is not needed. Name few prominent ones and give overview
 * Transport: list -> text. Add road, rail.
 * Tourist destinations: merge list into text
 * State only ten most populous cities ("important cities"). Merge in Demographics, may be Format like in Japan
 * Tourism as an industry needs to figure in Economy
 * Add dates in "History". eg. The region was originally settled by Kols in the Xth century CE/BCE. "The Pauravas(years), Kushanas(years) ... have ruled Uttarakhand in turns" Maintain chronology.
 * History also discusses people and terrain??