Wikipedia:Peer review/Vampire lifestyle/archive1

Vampire lifestyle
I am nominating this article for peer review because it has undergone a major editing spree which is now complete (so far as I can tell), and I think it may eventually become a candidate for featured status. Falcon 01:08, 27 Jun 2005 (UTC)
 * Any chance of fitting images being included? - Mgm|(talk) June 28, 2005 07:20 (UTC)
 * Some person added a picture of a cosplayer, but it didn't really work very well and was not relevant in any case. If you have any ideas for an image, let me know.  Falcon June 28, 2005 18:18 (UTC)
 * Don't really know too much about the genre but the article is quite informative and rather non-partial for something, uh, so interesting. As someone who probably wouldn't read this article unless it came up on a random page search or a Featured article, I would also start off with Types and variations and lead into Identifying Characteristics...that opening is a little strong and the rest of the chapters don't follow through, i would recommend building up to it, then close with Food sources and Criticism. I would be also be partial to a little more discussion on the vampire roleplayers and vampire fans who dress up as vampires but don't actually go around drinking blood (the people i normally think of when i thing of "vampire lifestyle").  it might help steer the article into the mainstream and not scare away potential viewers right off the bat. -Seasee 29 June 2005 06:58 (UTC)
 * I have added a section about those who are pretending to be members. Some cites would be nice, if anyone wants.  Falcon June 29, 2005 23:37 (UTC)
 * Update: it has been proposed that the lifestyle section in Vampire be merged into this article. Falcon July 5, 2005 05:42 (UTC)