Wikipedia:Peer review/Vancouver/archive1

Vancouver
I'm apart of WP:Vancouver. This article in particular has gad a bit of work. How can we improve? -- Selmo 04:53, 12 August 2006 (UTC)


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 * Overall a nicely developed article. I just have a few comments:
 * Normally the History is the first section. See for example the FA'd city articles: Seattle, Washington, Detroit, Michigan, &c.
 * I think the sentence, "Vancouver is the third largest film production centre," needs a citation.
 * Statements such as "Vancouver is internationally renowned for its beautiful scenery" and "Vancouver is considered to be a relaxed city, particularly by North American standards" border on the non-neutral and I think they need to be backed up with solid references.
 * The "Media" section needs a summary paragraph. Readers shouldn't need to drill down to get some basic information on that subject.
 * Thanks! &mdash; RJH (talk) 16:22, 23 August 2006 (UTC)