Wikipedia:Peer review/Vanna Bonta/archive1

Vanna Bonta
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I have spent weeks on it and it represents a great deal of research. The article has multiple contributors, so I know it still needs some tweaking, but I would like the best direction possible on how to do that.

Thanks, --15:03, 21 May 2014 (UTC)Georgiasouthernlynn (talk)