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Vices & Virtues
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like some suggestions on how to improve it, as I've read it over and it reads quite well to me. I'm not the most well-versed in the topic area, so as someone with limited knowledge of the band, I understood the article quite well. That being said, any suggestions for improving it would be fantastic!

Thanks, Yaminator  talk 23:48, 13 March 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 11:31, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Release date in lead differs from the one in the infobox. ✅
 * Link Pretty Odd. the first time in the opening paragraph of the main body. ✅
 * Fix the [citation needed] template in the infobox. ✅
 * Last half dozen references need to be completed. ❌ Removed them, since they only linked to the charts and didn't actually show anything of use.
 * One dead link in there. Hmm, I can't see any other sources, so I'll have to remove it.
 * Don't mix date formats in the refs. ✅
 * Don't use spaced hyphens in the reference titles, used spaced en-dashes per WP:DASH. ✅
 * Is the "Panic at the Disco" category incorrectly named now? Should it have a ! in it? ❌ It looks like its supposed to be sans exclamation mark. The category with the exclamation mark is intentionally left blank.
 * " nervousness in the beginning" -> "initial nervousness."? ✅
 * "On Monday, March 14," is the day really relevant? ✅ No, I don't think so! Removed it.
 * "(see release history)." yuck, either pipe link it or don't have this here. ✅ Removed it; folks can scroll!
 * "chart and #5 " etc, MOS says avoid using hash to represent "number" in prose. ✅
 * "has announced multiple tours" has this already happened? So shouldn't it be just "announced" rather than "has announced"? ✅
 * Not sure you should collapse those additional tracks. ✅
 * Only one release date is referenced in that table. ✅ Good catch!

This is great! Thank you for your suggestions. I'll look into implementing them. Yaminator  talk 18:13, 7 April 2012 (UTC)