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Villa Park
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've requested a peer review to get some feedback on recent changes I have made to the article with regards to a FAC in the future. I'm particularly interested in people's opinions on the prose. The article is already a GA and I follows the same sort of structure as most Featured association football stadium articles (eg Old Trafford, Portman Road etc. Many thanks for your time. Woody (talk) 17:38, 11 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Previous peer review

Comments from That takes me two paras into History. Hope this has been useful so far, will continue to review if prompted (although I am away this long weekend, so patience!). The Rambling Man (talk) 18:23, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Infobox seems to be missing the odd "stand" (for instance, "... and The Doug Ellis to the ...")
 * "is under a mile" -> less than a mile.
 * "England internationals at senior level" some kind of link to England national football team wouldn't go amiss here.
 * "It has hosted 16 England internationals at senior level. The first international was in 1899 with the most recent being in 2005." merge.
 * " Villa Park is the most used stadium in FA Cup semi-final history" reword perhaps to "has hosted more FA Cup semi-finals than any other stadium" and link FA Cup.
 * "The 1999 UEFA Cup Winners' Cup Final was held at Villa Park, the last ever final of the European Cup Winners' Cup. " would have "the last ever..." before "was held at Villa Park"
 * Be consistent on capitalisation of stand "North stand" vs "North Stand" for instance.
 * Infobox - Trinity Rd->Trinity Road.
 * Infobox - £25M - not sure I've seen M used for millions for money. But that's just me.
 * History quote needs a proper reference (in the references section) including isbn, publisher etc.
 * Seems a little whimsical to open the history section with a direct quote like that as well.
 * "The previous location of Aston Villa..." not really, perhaps "Aston Villa's previous home..." or something.
 * "to an estimated crowd of 15,000" when it opened, was there some kind of event that drew this 15,000 or was the ground simply able to host 15,000?
 * "21 year" hyphenate.
 * " the construction of a new cycle track constructed " - quick repeat of "construct" here.
 * Suggest linking "snagging".
 * "could house 40,000 spectators most of whom" comma before most.
 * "one week after Aston Villa" don't relink Villa here.
 * Holte Hotel caption doesn't need a full stop.
 * "at a cost of £887. At a cost of £1,300, t" repetitive.
 * "£8250," (etc) comma needed to separate thousands.
 * You have "Blackburn Rovers" but "Everton F.C." - be consistent.
 * Very useful thanks, take all the time you need. I've fixed all those issues above apart from snagging, I couldn't find a link for that. I've removed the Billy Walker quote as it was a bit fawning wasn't it. I had been wondering about it when I rewrote the section but you confirmed it for me. Thanks again, regards, Woody (talk) 21:38, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
 * You're welcome. I'll try another section or three tomorrow.  All the best. The Rambling Man (talk) 21:39, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks again. Take your time, on Sunday I have an appointment with Sky Sports and apparently Mr Pires now. As a note, I didn't do the European Final sentence in the lead either as I couldn't see another way of keeping both a link to the final and to the Cup article. Regards, Woody (talk) 21:44, 18 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Pires. One of my favourites.  Top three with Kanchelskis and Lee Sharpe.  Odd, I know, but there you have it.  Good luck v Blackburn, don't fancy your chances but then again, I'm a Tractor Boy so what would I know?! The Rambling Man (talk) 21:48, 18 November 2010 (UTC)