Wikipedia:Peer review/Vilnius Castle Complex/archive1

Vilnius Castle Complex
Article is already GA, recently it was expanded with new section. I would like to make this article an FA in upcoming future. So, I need an evaluation of this article before going on WP:FAC. M.K. 19:52, 25 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Quick glance shows that there are some unreferenced paragraphs.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 13:58, 15 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Could you please, be more specific which one and which parts should be with refs? M.K. 15:54, 15 February 2007 (UTC)
 * It's quite simple, really: look at the article and count paragraphs that don't have any references. Starting with At the time of the attack in 1390... I count 12, plus several other places in the article where citations should be added (usually paras with a ref in the middle, and no ref for the following sentences). Check Jogaila for a proper density of references that we now expect.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 17:14, 17 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Not bad at all, lots of interesting information. Assorted comments:
 * Piotrus's statement may be a bit strong, Jogaila is quite dense with references, I would not aim that high for a not particularly controversial article, but he does have a point that more could be cited.
 * "The Castle Complex has been inhabited since Neolithic times." Wow, the world's oldest castle! :-) Rephrase so it doesn't imply there was such a thing at that time, or just strike since the higher section says the same thing better.
 * "13–14th centuries" link both or neither.
 * "the invasion of the Russians in 1655" don't link Russians, link to an article about the invasion
 * "Recently the Seimas, Lithuania's Parliament, passed a law" - surely this can be cited to a news article; and what is "recently"? - give a date.
 * "Atop the tower, on January 1, 1919, the Lithuanian tricolor was hoisted for the first time." - reorder -> The Lithuanian tricolor was hoisted for the first time on this tower, on January 1, 1919. Also can you link to/write a Flag Day article?
 * "the site was bowered." - what does that mean? wikilink or explain.
 * "After the Russian invasion in 1655, the state began weakening, and that negatively affected the Royal Palace." - awkward, rephrase. --AnonEMouse (squeak) 21:07, 22 February 2007 (UTC)