Wikipedia:Peer review/Virtual band/archive3

Virtual band
Okay, drawing off the previous two peer reviews (found here and here) plus the FAC nomination (found here), along with the article itself, I have been able to deduce the following problems: Granted, this is more a request for contribution, but if anyone has any more problems with the article, then please say so here. --JB Adder | Talk 20:53, 2 January 2006 (UTC)
 * 1) The article is too short for feature article
 * 2) More in-article information may be needed on:
 * 3) * The Archies
 * 4) * Gorillaz -- especially along the lines of how they came to be
 * 5) * Crazy Frog
 * 6) The extent of the 'animated' qualifier for a virtual band -- should it include puppetry?
 * 7) A breakdown of the dynamics behind a virtual band is extremely necessary
 * 8) Language issues must be attended to
 * 9) Required images -- I've done a little along this line, but should there be more?
 * 10) The Net-based virtual band ( final paragraph of the intro before History now in a separate section) -- this seems, to me, to distract from the point of the actual article (the animated virtual band); should it be moved into a separate article?
 * 11) Some issues concerning article content, these two being the standout ones:
 * 12) * Did the Archies 'open the door' for other virtual bands?
 * 13) * The opening statement needs to be reworked as well
 * 14) Plus some extra sources required -- The Gorilaz's Takedown DVD is a great place to start, if anyone has it


 * Hi; response to your request on my talk page.
 * I'm not enamoured of the idea of footnotes other than for sources; if it's important put it inline or in a separate article. If it isn't get rid of it.  In this case, the person's name should be inline and the place where it was said as a source, I think.
 * I reformatted the references to use templates. This is much easier to type and cope with.  If you don't like the particular system I chose, there are others.
 * Please cover economic aspects; who profits; how do costs differ from normal bands? I've heard that most bands make their money in concert.  How does this affect virtual bands?
 * something about the (presumably session?) musicians behind the bands?