Wikipedia:Peer review/Vivah/archive1

Vivah
Hello, everyone, could someone have a look at this article. I hope it's referenced well enough (tried only to take newpapers as references). Since I'm one of the few editors to work on this article, please could someone review for: and maybe, someone could rate it and give me ideas how to improve the article further. (I took the featured Star-Wars-articles as role models.) Thanks a ton and best regards, Plum couch  Talk2Me 22:05, 29 December 2006 (UTC)
 * POV
 * Gossip
 * Stuff that simply doesn't belong into the article,


 * Perhaps you should use the Template:Cite web (or see Category:Citation templates for other applicable templates) template instead of the current scheme employed. And citations go after the punctuation, and a space follows the citation (e.g., Statement.1 Next statement.) Pepsidrinka 00:22, 30 December 2006 (UTC)


 * Only Fools and Horses is a sitcom and Latter Days is a movie that are current FA candidates. I don't know if they will pass FAC, but their footnotes are done correctly - please look at how the footnotes are formatted.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 02:52, 30 December 2006 (UTC)


 * I picked one of the many possibilities to reference/footnote an article and used it on the article. Have a look? -- Plum couch Talk2Me 22:08, 30 December 2006 (UTC)