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Voyage: Inspired by Jules Verne
I have no idea what I need to do to improve this article, and I need to know its major faults and I need an objective second opinion. Please, if there is a problem with fair use of images, please tell me what to do. I think that everything has been done correctly, but people still say that it is incorrect. HOW, exactly? also, if prose is bad, please inform me. If i'm wasting my time getting this peer review because the article is so bad, please tell me that as well. --Paaerduag 10:26, 13 June 2006 (UTC)
 * First, you need references, preferably inline. See References for more info. I also think that the article, especially the latter sections, could use more ilinks (see BTW). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 18:20, 13 June 2006 (UTC)


 * The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program. They may or may not be accurate for the article in question (due to possible javascript errors/uniqueness of articles). If the following suggestions are completely incorrect about the article, please drop a note on my talk page.


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.


 * Per WP:WIAFA, Images should have concise captions.


 * Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally do not start with the word "The". For example,  ==The Biography==  would be changed to  ==Biography== .


 * There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.


 * The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.


 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that the it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 2a.
 * You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions (and the javascript checklist; see the last paragraph in the lead) for further ideas.
 * Thanks, Andy t 01:36, 14 June 2006 (UTC)