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Voyeur (Kim Carnes album)


I've listed this article for peer review in the hopes that it will one day qualify for GA status. At the moment, the article is still rated as Start-Class on the WikiProject Albums quality scale and I do believe that it should now qualify for a C-Class rating at the least. There is substantial media commentary surrounding this album and there may be room for expansion here and there. I am mostly concerned about making the prose flow more smoothly, especially in the critical reception section.

Thanks, Skyrack95 (talk) 18:10, 15 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Skyrack95, I am going to close this review because I think it is suitable for GAN now. Your article is pretty good, although the reception section could be edited for better flow, I don't think it's an obstacle to GA status. The main issue I'm seeing is that the lead should be expanded to incorporate all the main points in the body per MOS:LEAD, perhaps double or triple the length would be good. But that can be addressed during a GAN, so I'd advise you to nominate it now. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  17:38, 16 February 2022 (UTC)