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Wally Schirra
I've listed this article for peer review because I am hoping to bring this article up to FA status. I am hoping to get feedback on my writing style, the content of this article, as well as any other areas of improvement.

Thanks, Balon Greyjoy (talk) 07:38, 19 October 2018 (UTC)