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Walter Rhodes/Cistine's proposition
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I made some amendments to my article after receiving feedback from a fellow Wikipedian. I require assistance to review the content again to ensure that it is suitable for publishing. Please suggest improvements (if any) on the article for it to be ready for publishing. I would like to ensure that the article does not sound like advertising for the company, but to inform readers on the shared services and outsourcing development in Perak, Malaysia.

Thanks, Cistine (talk) 11:56, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Peer review only works for articles that are in article space - this would have to be moved to Walter Rhodes for the PR to work / continue. Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 02:33, 26 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Since the other PR has been opened, I am archiving this Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 04:17, 26 June 2009 (UTC)