Wikipedia:Peer review/Wario/archive4

Wario
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it's a former nominated featured article which I believe has undergone significant improvement. There is $50 on the bounty board to get this article featured, and I believe it deserves a review before being taken to the front page.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, Arran64 (talk) 07:24, 13 April 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 10:17, 19 April 2012 (UTC)
 * "début " this is sufficiently anglicised now for us to lose the accent.
 * "1997-present" en-dash, see WP:DASH.
 * Three dab links need to be fixed, "Bowser", "garage" and "Sonic the Hedgehog".
 * Image captions which aren't complete sentences don't need full stops.
 * Last para of "Appearance and personality" is unreferenced.
 * Similarly all of "Powers and abilities" is unreferenced.
 * Overall, there's a distinct lack of references, that may be acceptable given it's mainly "plot" stuff which usually isn't overly ref'ed, but it may well be something that is commented upon at FAC.
 * No need to link common terms like "snake" or "cellar" or "god".
 * "Production I.G.." avoid that double full stop.
 * "Wario as seen in WarioWare, Inc.: Mega Microgame$!." similarly.
 * Avoid raw URLs in the refs.
 * Author names in refs, are they First Last or Last, First? Be consistent.
 * You link GameFAQs and GameSpot but not IGN...
 * "Mario characters" is not needed as "Mario enemies" is a more refined category.