Wikipedia:Peer review/Watchmen/archive1

Watchmen
I think this page has the potential to be a good article, but at the moment it is bogged down with certain issues. The main one at the moment is whether or not a "Themes" article should be added to the page or not. Whilst there are certain themes present in the novel, they are not verifiable, and, when written in the article, verge on being POV (see the talk page). Any suggestions on how to resolve this would be appreciated, as well as any suggestions on how to improve the article in general (perhaps referring to other comic book articles?). Thanks Adasta 23:48, 6 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Please expand the lead- see WP:LEAD . AndyZ t 00:24, 7 April 2006 (UTC)
 * This has been attempted. Compared with The Giver, an ex-featured article, I don't think there is much difference. Adasta 10:12, 16 April 2006 (UTC)


 * lots has been written about the themes of watchmen, so should be no problem finding it and using it in the article. see The Illuminatus! Trilogy as a guide. Zzzzz 12:38, 9 April 2006 (UTC)