Wikipedia:Peer review/Wendy's/archive1

Wendy's
This page should eventually be a featured article. Until then, it needs improvement. I've got some ideas, but i'd like to see more 11kowrom 22:08, 28 May 2006 (UTC)

Comment I fixed the wikilink 69.40.243.98 22:51, 28 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Comments by AndyZ:
 * Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at WP:GTL.


 * Please alphabetize the categories and interlanguage links.


 * The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.


 * Please provide WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also WP:CITE/ES; templates like and  may be useful here.


 * As notable as the "Chili hoax" was, it probably doesn't deserve its own section; suggest merging it into history as a ===level 3 heading.


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading  ==Magellan's journey== , use  ==Journey== .
 * Thanks, AndyZ t 23:49, 28 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Personally I think the "chili hoax" is rather notable. The legal case kept the story in the news for quite a while and I expect it had some impact on their business.  Some other things you might consider adding: (1) Charitable giving.  Wendy's sponsors a number of events, especially in central Ohio.  I would find a non-Wendy's source for these.  (2) Political contributions.  I've read that Wendy's corporate contributions are at a rate nearly three times that of McDonalds.  94% goes to support the republican party.  I would want to find another source for this.  Good luck. -MrFizyx 03:23, 2 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Agreed that charitable giving/sponsorships/political contributions are important. --  Zanimum 13:42, 14 June 2006 (UTC)