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Werner Voss
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I received a treasure trove of new information on Werner Voss, even as the article cleared A Class Review. Resultant rewrite may be somewhat verbose and/or over-detailed. Would welcome feedback, judicious trimming and tightening before going on to FA Review. Thanks, Georgejdorner (talk) 10:12, 23 September 2013 (UTC)

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 * I've looked at the changes since my last edit, down to Voss in command, and done some copyediting. I don't have an opinion on how much of the new text to include for FAC. - Dank (push to talk) 17:46, 23 September 2013 (UTC)