Wikipedia:Peer review/Where's Lazlo?/archive1

Where's Lazlo?
Would like to get this rated. Given the limited context of the article, I doubt it would make GA (but you never know!), but I'd still like to improve this to a higher level. Any comments, suggestions, whatever. Thanks Yngvarr 12:09, 24 July 2007 (UTC)

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question. ✅ I've expanded the lead as best as I currently can. ✅ Added a few more links ✅ Added some screenshots ✅ Added a screenshot of the title card You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 14:39, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
 * Consider adding more links to the article; per Manual of Style (links) and Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
 * This article has no or few images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under the Image use policy and fit under one of the Image copyright tags that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.[?]
 * If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]
 * This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?]
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]