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Willis Stephens
I think this is a well-sourced article that provides a NPOV about a colourful member of the Assembly who recently lost one of the most memorable local races in decades. MrPrada 00:20, 19 September 2006 (UTC)


 * I fixed wikilinks, you generally shouldn't wikilink things more than once within the body of the article. There are alot of short stubby paragraphs, most should be merged into larger paragraphs or expanded. Also you should alphabatize the categories. Medvedenko 04:03, 24 September 2006 (UTC)


 * The article is nearly silent on Stephens's life to the year 2006. Where was he born? What jobs did he hold before he ran for office? What did he do as an assemblyman? NatusRoma | Talk 04:03, 2 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 14:36, 14 October 2006 (UTC)