Wikipedia:Peer review/Wisconsin dairy industry/archive1

Wisconsin dairy industry


I would like a peer review on Wisconsin Dairy Industry. I have substantially expanded the article since its GAN, and I want a more rigorous review of the article and its content.

Thanks, JackFromWisconsin (talk &#124; contribs) 13:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments by Z1720
Hi, are you looking to submit this to FAC? If so, please add the article to Template:FAC peer review sidebar so that others know about this article's trajectory.

After a quick skim, I think the article has good information. Consider looking at WP:LIBRARY and Google Scholar for additional sources. I think the products section can be expanded upon, and I recommend a section explaining the dairy industry's effect on the Wisconsin economy (How much of the GPD is the dairy industry, and how has that changed over time? What government regulations/aid is given to this industry?)

Let me know if you have any questions. Z1720 (talk) 15:45, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , thank you for your comments! No, I am not looking towards making this Featured, at least for now. I wanted to get some feedback on how the article currently is, and what it is lacking. I will get working on expanding the products section, and adding on about the economic effects. JackFromWisconsin (talk &#124; contribs) 00:49, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Do you want to close this PR, and then reopen a new one when you are finished adding in the sources? Z1720 (talk) 15:00, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Yeah it would probably be best to close this PR for now, then start a new one later on. Thanks for your help again! --JackFromWisconsin (talk &#124; contribs) 14:11, 10 November 2021 (UTC)