Wikipedia:Peer review/Woman's Home Companion/archive1

Woman's Home Companion
I've listed this article for peer review because…I've recently made some substantial edits to an existing article.

Thanks, Jaldous1 (talk) 17:11, 15 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Comments by Tintor2 (talk) 16:17, 21 May 2016 (UTC)

Hello Jaldous1. The article could become a GA but there are somethings that bothered me. Other than I'm also making a peer review in Peer review/Allen Walker/archive1. I would appreciate responses.
 * 1) The lead feels like a spam of wikilinks. Try avoid by writing "It had multiple famous editors"
 * 2) Again with the lead. I would suggest expanding considering how big is the body of the article.
 * 3) There are several sentences unsourced. I tagged some for you to see.
 * 4) "Stats and lists about the magazine" feels quite empty. If you can't reference such large section, I would suggest removing it.