Wikipedia:Peer review/Women's rights in Saudi Arabia/archive1

Women's rights in Saudi Arabia
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I'm interested in improving it, need ideas for starting points.

Thanks, Noloop (talk) 18:54, 11 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Nice work! Interesting to read.
 * I've dropped in the Feminism sidebar. I suggest you consider whether it's the correct sidebar for the article; you may feel there's a better one (it's not a topic area that I edit often).
 * Build the lede, which is too short. It should summarise the article's contents.
 * Include at least one reference per paragraph. If you can't find a reliable source to support what you say, then don't say it—even if from your personal knowledge it's true.
 * I think the article would benefit from a copyedit. The Wikipedia Guild of Copyeditors may be able to help there.
 * I hope these brief comments are useful.— S Marshall  Talk / Cont  10:01, 14 August 2009 (UTC)


 * Thank you! Noloop (talk) 22:29, 14 August 2009 (UTC)