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Work Motivation
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because… I want to present this to a group of Psychology peers and faculty and this is a major part of my grade for my Industrial and Organizational Psychology class. This is my first Wikipedia Artle and I want to make sure it is adequate.

Thanks, Jastha08 (talk) 22:09, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Comments by Smallman12q Overall, its pretty good for a first article.Smallman12q (talk) 23:39, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
 * It needs more wikilinks wp:wikify. (These are the blue links you see)
 * It needs additional citations. Every paragraph should have a reference.
 * The tone is off in certain areas. For example, in "Self-Regulation Theory", it reads: "Another theory based in self-efficacy", "another" is not needed. An article is not like an essay, you don't need to introduce each section with "another theory".
 * The capitalization is off in some areas, for example with "Work Engagement"
 * It needs some copyediting
 * There really should be a section related to the effect of monetary compensation on work motivation.