Wikipedia:Peer review/World of Warcraft/archive1

World of Warcraft
This article is currently at GA-status. I would like to know what it would take for this to be the first Featured Article about an MMORPG. -- R'son-W (speak to me/breathe) 00:22, 10 July 2007 (UTC)

Spebi

Congratulations on a great article :)
 * I see a few external links within the article context, such as "[...] any player on any realm can view their current arena team's rankings called "The Armory"", under PvP rankings; this needs to be properly cited using  tags.
 * Replace "More information on this topic is available in this forum post, made by a Blizzard MVP (Most Valuable Poster)." with  or similar, or just add the link to External links.
 * Replace "Although widely popular (with 8 million players)," (under Controversy and criticism) with "Although widely popular (with 8 million players), ".
 * Try and find a reliable source to replace that fact tag (under Roleplaying). I doubt an article would ever become an FA with lousy fact tags all over the place (luckily there is only one in this article).

I can't really comment on any of the prose or Manual of Style issues right now, don't have the time. Again, it is a great article and everyone working on it has obviously put a lot of effort and time into it. Good luck with it! :) Kind regards, Sebi  &#91; talk &#93; 04:45, 15 July 2007 (UTC)