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Wright Brothers
I'd like to get comments on the Wright brothers article. I believe the weakest part is the section "In Business" for which I've written but not posted a revision. The revision would lengthen the already rather long article. It would give more details of the Wrights' business affairs between 1910 and 1915, when Orville sold the company. The "Business" revision also includes a few paragraphs about the remainder of Orville's life. Previously, someone suggested splitting the article in two, one for Wilbur, one for Orville. That idea was unanimously rejected (including my 'no' vote). I'd appreciate any comments on the article's content, style and length. Thanks! DonFB 04:16, 3 February 2007 (UTC)

Finetooth (talk) 17:03, 4 August 2009 (UTC)