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Wyandotte Caves
I know this still needs more work. The areas where I know additional work is needed are:
 * 1) Except for the section on bats, the sections on cave life are stubby and need some expansion.  However, I'm not quite sure where to go with the other sections.  I want to mention that these animals live in the cave, but only the bats seem to be the focus of scientific research.  I don't want to go into a lot of detail about the animals' lifestyles as that belongs in the articles about the individual species, not their habitats.  I'm not sure what more to put in these sections, or where to look for source material on it.
 * 2) It could use more pictures.  I recently re-visited the cave and took some pictures, but when they got back from the developer they were really poor quality (it's hard to get good pictures in a cave), so I've decided not to go to the effort of scanning and uploading them.

I would appreciate comments about any other areas where improvement is needed, as well as suggestions for the areas I already know about. Also, I learned some information on my recent tour that is not currently in the article. How do I cite a tourguide? ~  ONUnicorn (Talk 17:10, 20 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 00:51, 21 November 2006 (UTC)