Wikipedia:Peer review/Xin (flash)/archive1

Xin (flash)
Looking for help with general Wikification of the main article and one character description -- AfroDwarf 00:26, 22 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
 * The lead is one paragraph long, which is appropriate for this length of article, but I will try to revise it to better summarize the article. AfroDwarf


 * This article has little/no images. Please see if there are any free use images that fall under WP:IUP and WP:IT that can be uploaded. To upload images on Wikipedia, go to Special:Upload; to upload non-fair use images on the Wikimedia Commons, go to commons:special:upload.
 * I checked, all artwork is copyrighted, and none under a suitable license for use on Wikipedia. AfroDwarf


 * The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.


 * Please provide WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also WP:CITE/ES; templates like and  may be useful here.


 * When I get the time, I will carefully watch the episodes and cite using the style from the Final Fantasy X article. AfroDwarf


 * Per WP:MOS, the first letters of words in heading should not be capitalized unless: 1) it is a proper noun or 2) it is the first word of the heading.
 * fixed


 * There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged.


 * This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon. Perhaps include reception information, critism, or praise?
 * To be honest I'm not even thinking about FA yet, just trying to get it up to standard enough that it won't be deleted. AfroDwarf


 * This article is a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).
 * Thanks, AndyZ t 19:18, 22 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Thank you for providing feedback. AfroDwarf 21:55, 22 May 2006 (UTC)