Wikipedia:Peer review/Yechi

Yechi
This is my first major article. I'm not expecting it to be featured, I'm just looking for constructive criticism of any kind. Daykart 22:36, 17 December 2005 (UTC)


 * Its is a very go article but I would suggest adding a "see also" section, and an "external links" section to the article. I would also recommen adding a refrences. Tarret 23:07, 17 December 2005 (UTC)