Wikipedia:Peer review/Yesterday's Enterprise/archive1

Yesterday's Enterprise
Hoping to get this to FA. Main concerns are prose-based, but if there are parts of the article that are unclear to a lay reader or any other issues, let me know. Thanks! Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 00:00, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Just noticed there is a marginal more info on the creation of the physical Enterprise-C model, as well as its later reuse in . Trying to track down a decent source for Star Trek Online having a sequel to the episode in the mission "Temporal Ambassador", but haven't found one yet. Miyagawa (talk) 18:50, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Very, very brief mention of it here - although only says "Three years in, and just over a year after our Free-to-play launch, Star Trek Online celebrated its 3rd Anniversary. This time, we brought in Denise Crosby to reprise her role as Tasha Yar in a wonderful story, “Temporal Ambassador” - a sequel of sorts to the beloved Next Generation episode “Yesterday’s Enterprise”." Miyagawa (talk) 18:55, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
 * I've made minor text edits throughout to improve clarity and speak to the prose-based concerns you indicated in your request comments. Overall I think the page does a nice job of covering all of the relevant bases. It's a favourite episode off mine, so it was fun to read how it came to be! --Dnllnd (talk) 18:02, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
 * I made a few edits. Looks pretty good overall.Dig Deeper (talk) 21:39, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks a bunch for the look! Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 18:18, 6 December 2016 (UTC)