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You Lost Me
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I listed it for GA and it failed... So I'm planning to do it again, but I want someone to say something about it first. Thanks.  Jorn  talk 21:14, 4 May 2013 (UTC)


 * OK, I'll give my idea first:


 * Infobox
 * The file for "iTunes EP cover" isn't necessary


 * Lead
 * Lyrically, the song talks about a cheating man, who has left the protagonist's world view "infected" ---> I think this sentence has a problem
 * first in a room full of damaged furniture, second in an area filled with charcoal, and thirdly in a blue and white room. ---> first... second... third, not fist... second... thirdly


 * Composition
 * Set at 50 beats per minute, it is set in the key of A-minor, and Aguilera's vocal range spans from the low-note of Eb3 to the high-note of E5. ---> has a problem again. Fix it

Still reviewing, those are my first issues. &mdash; HĐ (talk) 04:07, 11 May 2013 (UTC)