Wikipedia:Peer review/Zab Judah/archive1

Zab Judah
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because, I completely rewrote the entire article and added sources where needed.

Thanks, Rvk41 (talk) 14:30, 23 May 2008 (UTC)


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Comments — Wackymacs ( talk  ~  edits ) 17:56, 26 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Several citations need formatting properly using a or  template (please use either one, not a combination of both types of template throughout the article).
 * Specifically, current refs 1, 2, 31 are missing full information and need access dates.
 * Also, what makes current ref 33 reliable? It is a GeoCities website. Please see Verifiability.
 * There doesn't seem to be any information on his early life, childhood and education.
 * There are lots of short stubby sub-sections under the professional career section, is it possible to merge any of these to improve overall flow?
 * Add citations to the infobox.
 * I have noticed an inline URL in the Personal life section, which is not formatted using the tags.
 * Looks good overall, except for those things. I do recommend a full copyedit by an editor new to the text, please see Peer review/volunteers and WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Members for lists of people who can help.