Wikipedia:Peer review/Zhou Tong (monks)/archive1

I think I've gone as far as I can for right now. I do have more info, but I'm waiting on outside sources to verify it for me. I'm looking for others with more info on the subject or just those who feel the page could be laid out differently. How is my grammar? (!Mi luchador nombre es amoladora de la carne y traigo el dolor! 11:40, 30 October 2006 (UTC))


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 22:44, 30 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Very intresting, I dont see this kind of articles (real yet mythical people) discussed too often so my suggestions will be limited. First thing I would suggest renaming "Fact or Fiction?" to → "Historiography" and placing it last. And the section "Modern Day" definetely has a name which doesn't fit it, I would suggest renaming to "In popular culture". Also the thing I found confusing is everytime you refer to a book you use the chinese letters, quite confusing for an english speaker. Anyway good luck with the article. - Tutmosis  00:40, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the suggestions. I can't change "Fact or Fiction" to "Historiography" and put it last since it lays the foundation for the historical aspect of Zhou Tong. I put this section first to introduce the various Yue Fei biographies that he has appeared in. If I put it last, people wouldn't know what I was talking about when I mentioned the names of Yue Fei's biographies. I will change the Chinese letters of the biographies to English. I appreciate your input. (!Mi luchador nombre es amoladora de la carne y traigo el dolor! 11:56, 31 October 2006 (UTC))