Wikipedia:Peer review/Ziaur Rahman/archive1

Ziaur Rahman
Hi - let's make this article an FA. Request all help and advice. Rama's arrow 02:00, 2 August 2006 (UTC)

I hope these are helpful for you. --Dekkanar 02:52, 2 August 2006 (UTC)
 * The article switches between refering to him as Ziaur and Zia. If Zia is a shorthand way of saying the name used for convenience, it seems innappropriate for an encyclapedia article. If it is a common cultural practice to shorten names that way, it should be explained.
 * The entire article needs more citations, but the Criticism and Legacy section in particular lacks any references and almost the entire section is speculative information that needs to be sourced.
 * A greater variety of refernced sources than one online article should be used. Some sources that may be helpful:
 * an Dec. 18, 2005 from The Statesman, a paper? published in Calcutta and New Dehli
 * Nov. 13, 2005 article in Business Recorder out of Karachi, Pakistan
 * Nov. 8, 2005 article in Kuwait Times
 * Mar. 21, 1991 article in Chicago Tribune
 * New York Times articles from Dec 8, 1976, May 28, 1977, Jun 4, 1978, Jun 7, 1978, Feb 19, 1979, Nov 11, 1979, Jul 28, 1980, Aug 29, 1980, May 30, 1981, May 31, 1981, and Sep 23, 1981.
 * Some copyediting would be helpful as well, I did a small amount myself.


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 01:33, 9 August 2006 (UTC)