Wikipedia:Peer review/Zilant/archive1

Zilant
Please, list your reviews, if possible :) --Untifler 18:07, 20 April 2006 (UTC)


 * An interesting article. Some comments:
 * The page needs plenty of in-line citations to back up the various facts. (Particularly if you could give sources for the legends.) Otherwise the reader has no idea how much is true, or pure hoax.
 * Tatar and Turkic need to be linked.
 * Please fix the multiple errors in the sentence: "It should be noted, that another peoples, that live arround Kazan, such as Chuvashes and Mari also have legends, related to Kazan's foundation, but no one refers to Kazan dragon."
 * "After 16th century Russians loaned this legend from Tatars." Did you mean "acquired" this legend?
 * "Sceptics": Which skeptics are they? Is there a reference?
 * Thanks. &mdash; RJH 15:09, 21 April 2006 (UTC)


 * The lead needs to be expanded, maybe fix the red links while you're at it. --Osbus 18:39, 23 April 2006 (UTC)