Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 August 29

SONAmusicgroup
This page is about a popular MidWest NeoPagan music group called SONA. Thanks for your feedback, I love suggestions for improvement and I am glad to make appropriate changes. Timster132 (talk) 02:04, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Not really much I can suggest other than what's set out in those tags at the top that are already there, to be honest. Chevy  monte  carlo  - alt 13:55, 29 August 2010 (UTC)

User:Mfishermfisher/Nancy Irwin
67.231.114.207 (talk) 02:25, 29 August 2010 (UTC)

Diane Pinkard
Mfishermfisher (talk) 03:07, 29 August 2010 (UTC)

The Reporter: News
DamonTheNinja (talk) 03:20, 29 August 2010 (UTC)

Periodic Systems of Molecules
After an article is given to "Request for review" and if it is reviewed than what happens to it? I posted one entitled "Periodic Systems of Molecules" on 13 August and have only after repeated attempts been able to learn that there is a backlog. Thank you in advance for your help.Negovori (talk) 16:29, 29 August 2010 (UTC)Negovori

Negovori (talk) 16:29, 29 August 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eallen.tgs/thinkglobalschool
Thank you for your help so far - I have made some cosmetic improvements and added some more references. Any additional feedback would be most helpful. Thank you for all of your time and attention!


 * Previous thread:***

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Eallen.tgs/thinkglobalschool
Hi all, and thanks for your help.

I'm looking for general feedback as to the written content in this article. I appreciate your time.

Thanks again - Eallen.tgs (talk) 02:47, 26 July 2010 (UTC)

Notability seems to be an issue, as the draft doesn't have any real inline citations and references. A good tutorial about referencing asserted facts on Wikipedia is available here and a good overview about writing your first Wikipedia article is available here.

Please study up on the four articles I've mentioned above, they'll all be an immense help. If you need to talk to some experienced Wikipedia editors about editing your Wikipedia article, come talk to some helper-editors *live*.
 * Hope that helps! Shearonink (talk) 15:26, 26 July 2010 (UTC)

Eallen.tgs (talk) 19:09, 29 August 2010 (UTC)

Frederick Moyer
Any feedback would be appreciated.

Travsul (talk) 19:53, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Consider maybe adding more references if possible, and perhaps a picture if you can. Thanks! Chevy  monte  carlo  - alt 16:51, 31 August 2010 (UTC)

The Chlenstvo Brotherhood []
Open to any suggestions...

Ukirednffc (talk)
 * You definitely need some references; preferably displaying them using citations to display them. Chevy  monte  carlo  - alt 16:49, 31 August 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Melvin_(film)
Eborgerding (talk) 01:12, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Consider expanding the article perhaps and add some names to the references, like this:

Chevy monte  carlo  - alt 16:47, 31 August 2010 (UTC)