Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 December 4

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Haengbokhada/She%27s_the_First_draft
Hello.

I have written a draft on my user page about She's The First - a non-profit organization based in the US.

I would like to request feedback if it's ready for the main page and suggestions how to improve it further. All feedbacks will be greatly appreciated.

Thank you very much.

Haengbokhada (talk) 01:05, 4 December 2010 (UTC)

Gender_Systems
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gender_Systems The page is new, and although still undergoing formatting renovation, and still impending proper citation formatting, we would like feedback on the content of the article compared to Wikipedia standards

BL00DW0LF6 (talk) 03:41, 4 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Overall, it looks like a well-written article. You are relying heavily on Nanda, but I don't think that it creates a onesource-type problem.
 * I've made a few formatting changes to the references that I think you might like; if you don't, then click here to WP:UNDO them.
 * You might be interested in WikiProject LGBT studies. A WikiProject is a group of volunteer editors who like to work on the same type of articles.  Feel free to go to their talk page and leave them a note about the new article.  WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:25, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

Semi-On (band) Nagoya, Japan
This is a newly created page about a gypsy-funk band in Nagoya, Japan. Any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks for your time. Semi-On Japan (talk) 04:46, 4 December 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Josh_Werner
Please help me with article for Grammy nominated and multiple Gold record earning Songwriter, Producer and Bassist.

Dutchkash (talk) 06:10, 4 December 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indian_Institute_of_Journalism_%26_New_Media
Please could someone review this article. The article's about a college in India. They've got 'different' teaching methods and links to the George Foundation (and Abraham George). If I get the time this week, I'll expand the article with any information I can find online.

Robertkirby137 (talk) 07:05, 4 December 2010 (UTC)


 * I cleaned up a few minor things. I think the article looks pretty nice.  WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:11, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SLT_Warrior_(NONSHS)
Garished (talk) 12:33, 4 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Moved to User:Garished/SLT Warrior (NONSHS) due to notability concerns and lack of sources. Plastikspork ―Œ (talk) 21:31, 5 December 2010 (UTC)

C.Markland Kelly
Just lookingfor a general review with feedback. This is the first time I have contributed.

Aaronrroe (talk) 16:05, 4 December 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mikolim
The title of this article seems to be formatted incorrectly. How can this be changed?

Thanks

Brouillette.ryan (talk) 17:33, 4 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Do you mean that you think it should be WP:MOVEd to "Miko Lim" instead of being at "Mikolim"? In this instance, it needs an admin, so you'll have to go to Requested moves to make a request.  WhatamIdoing (talk) 16:48, 8 December 2010 (UTC)


 * The request has been made. how long does it usually take?Brouillette.ryan (talk) 16:44, 11 December 2010 (UTC)

Bedsitcom
I recently created this article, and I'm quite keen to see if I can possibly get it to GA status. Since it's only three days old, it seemed a bit premature to list it at a peer review, so I am putting it here in the hope that someone might be able to think of ways in which it can be improved, e.g. whether I have explained everything well enough. I hope that that's okay. Thank you very much. A Thousand Doors (talk) 18:45, 4 December 2010 (UTC)


 * I think the article is in pretty good shape. Good luck with the GA process, if you decide to nominate it.  WhatamIdoing (talk) 16:45, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

Fekeng (talk) 19:08, 4 December 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Clement_Esebamen
Ireland's young black people are in need of an inspirational moral figure whom they can identify and emulate. Ireland is also in a situation that they need all the inspiration and creative forces to help get the country back on the path to growth. These resources exist within its vibrant immigrant population and one individual who stands heads and shoulder above his peers is Mr Esebamen. I have created this page and I am confident that thousands of people all over the world will have something to say about and learn from this man.

Fekeng (talk) 19:16, 4 December 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Haengbokhada/She%27s_the_First_draft
Hello again.

I had asked feedback here and in the Drawing Board, and feedback shows it's reasonable so I have moved the article about She's the First and is waiting for review.

I would gladly appreciate a review on the article since it's also my first. I also want to make sure that I haven't violated any issue about NPOV and other things. And also suggestions how to improve the article

Thank you very much.

Haengbokhada (talk) 19:42, 4 December 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ESMcL/Motive_Interactive
I would like to upload my new page into the main Wikipedia body. I will have a descussion page for advice form any other editors that might offer help or references to this article.

ESMcL (talk)20:08, 4 December 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fleshema/Alpine_Valley_Ski_Area
I'm new to wikipedia and don't know how to go about finishing up my page so it can go live.

Fleshema (talk) 22:45, 4 December 2010 (UTC)