Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 July 16

three primes
deleted by Neefer

Neefer (talk) 00:10, 16 July 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't understand what you're asking, is there something you need help with? ~ Qwerp Qwertus ·  Contact Me  · 06:04, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Neefer/Three_Primes_%28alchemy%29
I know it's very short, but a link to a nonexistent article was in Alchemy symbols. I didn't know what the Three Primes are, and I suspect that I am not alone.

If I submitted this multiple times, my apologies.

Neefer (talk) 00:13, 16 July 2010 (UTC)
 * It is very short, but I'm sure nevertheless, many visitors will find it useful. If you can, you should probably try to write more about it and add some categories. Good job though - after you do that, would you like me to move it to main space for you? ~ Qwerp Qwertus ·  Contact Me  · 06:14, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Centricity_Music
Jake.Vonn (talk) 15:49, 16 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Pretty good, but it needs some good third-party sources\references from newspapers, news stations, big websites, ect. and a few categories. A picture might also be useful! ~ Qwerp Qwertus ·  Contact Me  · 06:26, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sixteen_Cities
Needs review for new article. For a band based out of Portland that is now getting some substancial radio play.

Jake.Vonn (talk) 15:51, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Suitsandboots/All_My_Friends_Are_Dead
Suitsandboots (talk) 16:08, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vegetarian_Times_(magazine)
I thought I already submitted for feedback request but can't seem to find it in the feedback list. If this is a duplicate please be patient. I'm learning the ropes here at wikipedia (and falling off them alot!)

This is my first article. I'd appreciate feedback. Thanks!

ErinNik (talk) 16:41, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

Mounted Warfare TestBed
Requesting review for new page.

Pwmonday (talk) 17:46, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Treefe/MediaSpark_Inc#Reference_Descriptions
Treefe (talk) 17:57, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DAG_KDG/OPOWER
I propose the following article on OPOWER, a software services company that is noteworthy because of its well-covered system for encouraging energy savings and because of a visit by President Obama this year. OPOWER is a client of the David All Group, where I am employed.

DAG KDG (talk) 19:23, 16 July 2010 (UTC)
 * It's great and ready for a formal posting. Thank you for writing this especially since I was about to do so myself. richardc020 (talk) 01:04, 27 July 2010 (UTC)

FC Barcelona in Europe
I have added a lot of sources, but would like a copyedit on the prose.

Sandman888 (talk) 19:25, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

e.g. User:Lookslikemeband/Deepfield (band)
I know I haven't added all of the sources for proper citations yet. I'm getting them now.

Lookslikemeband (talk) 20:01, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Symbyax
Short article about Symbyax, because it's a separate thing from olanzapine, and should have a separate article.

Persephone12 (talk) 20:52, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Sholmes12/Chip_Cravaack&action=submit
Do I need to reference each sentence of the article or can I just post external links? And if I do need to reference everything, can someone help me? I obtained most of my information from Chip Cravaack's website.

Sholmes12 (talk) 22:20, 16 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lubyb/Dorothy_Grant
Hello Wiki Editors!

Thank you so much for reviewing my article entry. This is the first time that I've written for Wiki and I welcome your feedback. Please let me know what you think.

And, I've read the footnote page and attempted to make sense of references, but it isn't quite right. Could you please help me to improve my referencing?

Thank you for your time and consideration :)

B. Luby 01:17, 17 July 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Designsbyd/Daniel_Hayes_%28actor%29
i am trying to restore this article from deletion. how much more work does it need before i can move it into the main article space?

Designsbyd (talk • global contribs  • email) 21:20, 17 July 2010 (UTC)