Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 June 13

DJ Supay
DJ Supay http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DJ_Supay

Looking for feedback from anyone else about this particular DJ. I heard that he is starting a record label as well, but can not find conclusive information on this. Any input is appreciated

CBanks2343 6/12/10 CBanks2343 (talk) 01:11, 13 June 2010 (UTC) 01:11, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
 * There are definitely some tone problems with the article. At the moment it sounds like an advertisement, so I think you should perhaps think about rewriting the article so it sounds more neutral - for more information see the guidelines at WP:NPOV. Hope this helps! Chevy  monte  carlo  09:26, 13 June 2010 (UTC)