Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 November 13

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Elika_Associates
please help me figure out what needed to be changed...

Elika2010 (talk) 13:48, 13 November 2010 (UTC)
 * The article's subject seems notable, as you have a few good (known as reliable) references. I do think from a layout point of view all the little sub-sections in the main 'History' section could be merged into one paragraph, although I do know that is a very minor issue. Overall, I think it's a good start, so well done. [[User:Chevymontecarlo| Chevy monte  carlo  06:42, 16 November 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SkieferEnt/Molly_Dunsworth
Is this article ready to be published?

SkieferEnt (talk) 20:00, 13 November 2010 (UTC)
 * It's a good start from a formatting/layout point of view but the article still has no references. Please try and add links to reliable references from third-party sources, if you can. The best way to display these references in the article is by using inline citations. I now just realised that this user has been blocked indefinitely, so I suppose there's not much more point in reviewing the article....! Chevy  monte  carlo  06:38, 16 November 2010 (UTC)

3PL Systems
3PL Systems has been noted in various print and online publications making this a notable source.

Walterlmitchell3 (talk) 00:02, 14 November 2010 (UTC)
 * It seems like the article has been speedily deleted. Take a look at the reason(s) why (if any were given) and try to make improvements to your basic draft from that, and then they'll be less chance of it getting deleted again. Chevy  monte  carlo  06:39, 16 November 2010 (UTC)